英语高手进``

Why don't you do your homework yourself?The teacher give you the task just want you to praetice English,but you actually set aside your teacher's pains,don't you feel guilty?
BOB was my pen friend,who came from New York.He lived 2 kilometers away from school.Usually,he rode to school,which would take him 25minutes,but if it rained ,he would take bus,and would reach school in 15 minutes.His parents work in the hospital 3 kilometers away from his home,they drove to work,and it would take them 30 minutes.
（尽管我帮你写了，我希望你以后还是自己做自己的作业！）
部分语法该了，其他的没有错，希望你能查下字典，至于hospital后要不要加which 我想你还是考虑下，当然加了没错，不加也不会错的

guilty吧

写作文的老兄，grammar check please

没必要用过去时吧

1. New York
2. It takes 25 minutes to ride to school. He takes buses around 15 minutes to school in rainy days.
3. His parents work
4. 3 miles
5. It would take
6. hospital which is

你说得对，只是习惯不同吧，继续努力